I love the rhythem in this poem. I think everyone can identify with being woken up by annoying birds at 4a. The crow photos are cute, too.
My favorite line is "The crow is a curious fellow." It seems to fit the animal very well.
Mourn should probably be Morn though? Or is it a sad morning, as well? Also the 2nd line feels a bit awkward when you say it aloud. Try a comma after sigh, too, since a pause makes sense after the word.
Hope the critique is okay - I don't write them very often.
Great poem! Keep them up!
Whoa, I did not expect a critique so fast.
Thank you, glad you liked this.
And thank you for catching my error, yes its suppose to Morn not Mourn. *smacks self in forehead* This is why I tell people not to rely totally on Spell Check, perhaps I should take my own advice.
And yes, a comma does make sense after sigh in the second to last line. Thanks for the suggestion.
Thanks you for the critique, I think is great and very helpful.